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Alone
Contributed by
SammieMarie
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Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 05:53:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She is the girl
With the tear stained face
Lying before her
Secrets too great
Her world is empty
No one cares
She's all alone
There's no one there
She hides from her fears
They won't go away
The tears keep falling
Harder each day
She puts on a smile
So no one can see
But I know her too well
--The girl is me.
Copyright ©
SammieMarie
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2008-08-11 05:53:12]
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Re: Alone
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 07:41:31 AM AEST
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a sad read, but dont worry, ur not the only one who feels this way. take care
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Re: Alone
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by holy on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 05:39:28 PM AEST
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| Thank you for sharing my mood, I love your poem too, very great ! although it was really a lillte of sadness, I believe you will have a happy and lucky future. |
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Re: Alone
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 11:11:26 AM AEST
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I feel your pain as this one flowed
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