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Remember That Night I Killed You?
Contributed by
amber_vonhorror
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Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 07:40:33 PM in AEST
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Hey baby.
Remember that night you and me we laid side by side
And i stabbed your spleen, with my knife?
Then we snorted fifty lines
And i sat and watched you die
Then we laughed and kissed and ********
You hit me so hard I couldn't sit up
And i had a black eye, and a bleeding nose
My world was dizzy, and you broke a few more bones
Then when I woke up
I grabbed my gun. I shot you right under your lung
And the blood saturated my kitchen floor
But i couldnt help myself, I shot you some more!
Then when you stopped bleeding you grabbed my head
And threw me like a rag doll into the bed
You kissed my neck and traced my hips
Then you bit like a vampire into my lips
It felt so good; but i wanted more.
I grabbed a razorblade, and pushed you to the floor
Picked the bluest artery, and took a slash
And watched in orgasm at the bleeding gash
You couldnt move, and I sat in the blood
And drowned in it. *******, this was our love!
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Re: Remember That Night I Killed You?
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 11:32:59 PM AEST
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| wow.. kinky. lol. thanks for posting, it's not really my style but it's well written and unique. |
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Re: Remember That Night I Killed You?
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by elle on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 10:25:03 AM AEST
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| prolific self-indictment, indeed. . . still I find it intriguing, to say the least. . . more power to you. peace. elle |
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Re: Remember That Night I Killed You?
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by juliestevens18 on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 08:44:08 AM AEST
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Wow
I am very impressed with this. I wish I could write as... well I don't know what to call your writing. It is very passionate and angry, lusty and daring. I really enjoyed this piece. Keep writing! |
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Re: Remember That Night I Killed You?
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 10:57:57 AM AEST
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Oohhhhh
this is so beautiful.... |
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Re: Remember That Night I Killed You?
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by maggot on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:31:31 PM AEST
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wow great write i like it
~maggot~ |
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