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Forever
Contributed by
Anonymous44
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Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 02:04:56 PM in AEST
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To the rest of the world
We are just good friends
Friends that care about each other
And would die for one another
But don’t you still think
That there could be more
Take a walk down a familiar a path
And meet me halfway
Lay on our backs and watch the clouds
And make it so every shape
Somehow relates to us
Just spending one minute with you
Could make a memory to lighten my life forever
Sometimes I just lay in bed
And think about you
Your beautiful smile
The cute way you laugh
And I say to myself
I am the luckiest guy in the world
To even know you
And I know there is a chance I will never get you back
But I still hope and I still wish
I wish on every shouting star
That passes through our atmosphere
And I hope that one day all my wishes will come true
But I have one more thing to say to you my dear
I will always love you
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Anonymous44
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2008-08-10 14:04:56]
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Re: Forever
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by ReyAkARey on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:11:58 PM AEST
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| Love this poem |
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Re: Forever
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:47:28 PM AEST
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This is so adorable. I love it
Michelle |
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Re: Forever
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 04:46:29 PM AEST
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i was caught up in this poem even rite at the 1st stanza...great job. This helped me redefine what love means. thanx. and the last stanza was bitter sweet, but thats what love is, and u possess it. The day of reunion may come, so keep wishing. take care
-K.Z.. |
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Re: Forever
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 11:46:33 PM AEST
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| This was bitterly awesome... and you captured what love really is. You are thankful to even know the person and have them in your life even if they aren't at the moment "yours". This just is unbelievably simple and complex at the same time and I enjoyed the poem from start to finish.. thanks for posting, you got talent so keep on writin and posting, and I will keep on reading:) |
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Re: Forever
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by Mild_Tempest on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 08:37:45 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, and very true as well. I think a lot of guys feel the same way as you express in this poem |
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Re: Forever
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by akakin on
Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 01:54:37 PM AEST
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(Just spending one minute with you
Could make a memory to lighten my life forever
Sometimes I just lay in bed
And think about you
Your beautiful smile
The cute way you laugh
And I say to myself
I am the luckiest guy in the world
To even know you)
Do u noe how many times i catch myself sitting on my bed thinking some of the same things about some i once loved or a boyfriend... realli gud love it |
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