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Whispering Sands
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 12:09:15 PM in AEST
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Reflections of my tears,as though a starlit sky
Beneath my breast a heartbeat skips
As I look beyond and sigh...
Beyond the timeless beauty of a deep blue velvet night
Farther than eternity,where always there is light
Miles in the distance,beneath moonbeams and stars
The deserts sands are whispering,shimmering afar
I crave within the cool eve wind,dressed only in a song
A thought plays upon my lips,and moves my tears along
I think about your smile and the way it touches mine
As you tempt me from so far beyond,desert sands of time
Warming to the flesh,one mere taste of yesterday
Fantasies caressed,in our eclipse of night and day
Stolen moments but a few,I make the most of stars
As I listen for the whispers,from desert sands afar
Eyes are of the soul,one heart can beat for two
Beneath my breast a smile is born
Each breath I take is you
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Re: Whispering Sands
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 01:45:45 PM AEST
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Oh Whispers..It is so good to see you posting again... I have missed your warm, sensual writes....You are a timeless beauty who has returned home.. Welcome back!!
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Re: Whispering Sands
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by wheels on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 04:11:14 PM AEST
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A lovely poem. well written and metered - THX
kevin
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Re: Whispering Sands
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 01:03:10 PM AEST
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Great to see you back, hope you stay awhile.
This is a very beautifully romantic sonnet.
Great write...........Mike |
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Re: Whispering Sands
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 07:58:17 PM AEST
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Your words have always touched me in a way no others can. There is such a softness in your writing....a warmth that seeps into my very soul. This is beautiful my old friend. :)
Very well done
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: Whispering Sands
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 08:01:52 AM AEST
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Oh My LovingWhiskers.......I just discovered you are still here.......such lovely memories I have of you, and after reading your words again, I now remember why.
No one can put down on paper, in words, what you mysterious create. You haven't lost it dear........My heart beat you make!!!
Love you, and welcome back dear.
I was gone for so long, and I'm just so happy to have you back!*smiles*
Warm love
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