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Rewind
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 07:59:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time twists, as the world grows cold,
Another move, again a broken home,
Now in Germany, the family's not here,
Pain digs deep, as the eyes fill with tears,
So again I write, it's been a year,
Forgotten by most, but again I appear,
Talking of hardship, and family I miss so dearly,
Alone again in a new land, once again a heartbroken man,
So here I go, rattling on with only a picture to hold,
My wife the rock, my kids my air,
My family my life, I feel like pulling out my hair,
As night falls the stars take flight,
The moon glows, and life moves slow,
A new world but yet I reach back, the past holds the key,
Dealing with emotions attempting to get free,
Fight back the tears, I must show no fear,
Lost is the time, with no chance to rewind.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2008-08-10 07:59:58]
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Re: Rewind
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by MichelleLynn on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 09:15:42 AM AEST
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I really like this.
Seems really tough...
Keep writing |
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Re: Rewind
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 01:54:45 PM AEST
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Hey Matt!! How could we forget you?? Never, my friend, I have missed you so much and I am so happy to see you posting again...even though I know you must be suffering there. Hold fast to your beliefs...
And please, don't pull out your hair!! You'll lose it naturally in time..lol..
Please wish Tracy a Happy Birthday for me. 9th Aug is it? I've missed her also...
Hugs and Love
Jenni |
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Re: Rewind
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:50:56 PM AEST
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Matt,
I havent forgotten you infact was thinking about you the other day and wondered where you took off to.
I am so sorry your so hurt, it sounds like your having hard times again my friend. Hang in there and keep in touch ok..
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Rewind
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by elle on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 09:00:06 AM AEST
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| what beautiful expression. peace. elle |
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Re: Rewind
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 01:07:24 PM AEST
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Glad to see you back...
Shari |
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Re: Rewind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 02:36:14 AM AEST
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Welcome back.
Nice piece of work, even if it comes from a place of lonliness. I hope that changes soon. |
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Re: Rewind
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by elle on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 11:09:00 PM AEST
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| no chance to rewind. so true of real life. peace. elle |
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