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Please Hold?
Contributed by
foRbiddEn
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Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 04:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Falling, I'm falling down.
Falling down in a spiral.
I am falling so hard, so fast.
In a spin, in a spiral.
Will someone save me?
Put a hand out and save me.
Falling so fast, I'm not sure
if someone will be able to.
In a spin, in a spiral,
someone finally saved me.
Falling, I'm falling in love.
Falling in love with my savior.
Will you catch me?
Will you fall with me?
Will you love me?
Fall with me in a spin,
in a spiral.
Let me save you, put a
hand out and save you.
Falling, I'm falling down.
Falling, down in a spin.
Why didn't you hold on?
You saved me, I thought.
I am falling, confused.
Is this the end yet?
When will I stop falling, and hit the bottom.
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foRbiddEn
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2008-08-09 16:05:14]
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Re: Please Hold?
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 04:31:51 PM AEST
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The bottom will come soon enough, along with the jagged spires littered with the dead and dying dreams of a thousand dejected hearts.
Gotta love love, or perhaps that is what we do all too often...
Keep writing ^_^
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Re: Please Hold?
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by MichelleLynn on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 04:50:15 AM AEST
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I really like this.
Alot of people can probably relate.
This is really good.
Keep writing :) |
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