|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Late Night
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 05:11:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
I love the cast of this Neon Glow,
transformation by day by night.
The city a ugly sight until the call of dark.
It stirs a romance about it.
Casting a dazzle in these tired eyes.
The trucks motor purring softly
half awake sippin coffee at the truck stop.
And the lights turned down low in the sleeper
and my thoughts strewn allover the place.
My eyes drifting off to the distance
and my heart stirs with the Neon Glows haze....
VIVA LAS VEGAS BABY!
Copyright ©
shelby
... [
2008-08-08 17:11:54]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 07:01:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
What a beautiful picture you've painted here
shel, captivating the heart of the wanderer,
and the soul of the dreamer, your a sleepy
eyed poet par excellance . . .
and ty 4 your read . . .
((((Michelle))))
Ben . . . |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 07:38:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Although I have never been to Las Vegas the more that you tell me about it the more I feel like I have. I have to agree yet again that you paint a beautiful picture. You are excellent with words and your imagery is amazing....see you at your next stop......have a safe trip.....say hi to Texas for me....I miss ya.
Rich |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 07:48:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
you have weaved a dreamy picture here, i was totally entranced by this write, the strange glow of neon light captivating the traveller, you have a gift my friend, you are very talented and its hard to describe how hard this poem hit me, it just reminds me of all those times when i didnt want to leave a place after a holiday, simply stunning!!
keep it up! |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 10:33:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I remember it well good write
Shari
|
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 02:51:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love the way you create such a vivd scene for the readers eyes.
One note, might I suggest "by day to night"?
Anyway, awsome job on putting us right there with you! |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 09:39:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| o`hel yes..been some time I`ve been to vegas" I never wrote on thing about that town...guess I was busy" lol! good write Shel...Lane |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 01:07:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful write, Shelby....
Jenni |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 05:31:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Indeed, Shel, cities and townships are mostly ugly by day. Neon lights at night is makeup on the drab face of civilisation. Play the pokies for me will ya, and send me the winnings check when you can.
Spike |
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 11:41:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nice piece of writing.
|
|
|
Re: Late Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 09:48:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hey Michelle, yep look what the cat dragged in, lol, ME! Boy oh boy have I missed visiting your pages my dear friend. I can absolutely visualize Las Vegas and it's Night Life in my head through your well informed and descriptive write. A wonderful journey you took my mind on. Thanks for the Neon Smiles~
Wonderful and delightful as is all your work. Well done dear friend.
love n hugs,
Sue M |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
