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Darkness of Sorrow
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 02:09:15 AM in AEST
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I am the nothing in nothingness
Alone in the void that no one sees
Trapped in the darkness of sorrow
That everyone, yet no one understands
Many share the sorrow
Each of us share the grief
But alone in the darkness I sit
Begging for relief
Surrounded by my loved ones
Yet feeling all alone
Lacerated and bleeding
Silenced cries yet unknown
Outstretched hand un-noticed
I stand here all alone
Praying in this moment
That you will take me home
Please heal me from the pain
As I watch a dear one depart
Give me strength and presence
Overcoming weakness of the heart
It is now my family needs me
And the power that I hold
Embraced in motherly kindness
Their pain I will enfold
~Peace~
Shannon Musser
08/07/2008
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 02:36:21 AM AEST
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Hun, I feel your pain here. I truly do. I know that there is a LOT going
on with you at the moment and this is just a part of the whole. It grieves
me to know how much you've been enduring.
This is so emotional. And painfully beautiful. I think the picture is perfect.
Your pain is evident and your heart is immense. Tremendous work
here hun. A glorious work of art as tribute to the love you still and always
will feel, for beautiful Dakota.
Amazing post. *hugs you tight*
~ Breezy
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by shelby on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 04:45:13 PM AEST
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Shannon,
this brings tears to read. I felt this so deeply.
I was thinking about you today. I hope you will be ok.
I miss you. I will call you in a few days give you the scoop.......
hugs and love
Michelle
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 05:34:37 AM AEST
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Immensly emotional!
The expression of pain is overwelming.
I am saddened that you must endure it, yet I praise this work. |
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by Crow on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 09:59:42 AM AEST
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| I don`t know whats going on in your world my friend, but I`m sending all best wishes to you..beautiful write..Lane |
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 11:46:29 PM AEST
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Outstanding! So much emotion.
~Stephan |
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by Spike on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 08:23:48 PM AEST
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Shannon,
heartfelt sadness enclosed in these lines, but also the courage to endure personal pain to relieve that of others - a noble subject in the ingnominity of human behaviour.
Spike |
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Re: Darkness of Sorrow
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:47:48 AM AEST
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my heart goes out to you, its never easy to loose someone.....
big hugs n' love nessa |
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