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Calliope of Apollo
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 03:51:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silver moonlight drapes and crawls across his back.
He shivers.
Candlelight draws the warm embrace that I cannot come close to.
He exhales.
I am jealous.
My Apollo brings with him the power to heal and cure.
I languish.
My Apollo holds within the plagues of utmost torture.
I am spared anguish.
He smiles.
Cool, orchestral waves stir the pools within his clear blue eyes.
He whispers.
Lyres sing softly songs that seem to spell my name.
He lingers.
I am enamored.
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liquidsunshine
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2008-08-07 15:51:57]
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Re: Calliope of Apollo
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 04:32:56 PM AEST
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A very engaging and artful piece. Nicely paced, well-honed and vivid, and the emotions you've laid out speak loud and clear through even a slightly held-back veil.
- A |
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Re: Calliope of Apollo
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:02:44 PM AEST
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Damn chels! It's so nice to see a piece by you! And what a write to submit!
I am in full agreement with Andrew. The emotions in this are so delicate
and full of reflection. I adore how you wrote this. Unique and classy and
just damn fine poetry! Beautiful, hun. And I have to say any piece that
opens with "Silver moonlight" has my FULL and undying attention.
EXCEPTIONAL!!
~ Breezy
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Re: Calliope of Apollo
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 01:53:24 AM AEST
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this is passionate and lovely
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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