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Metal Bodies of Birth
Contributed by
skyhawk432
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Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 12:21:17 PM in AEST
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The left side-view mirror displayed
my mop top as fringing from the squall;
which tasted the blow of a wall like
the nose bathed in powder that
now curved from a hard day's night
of Forward Control kissing the club
and its mojo filter went flying;
free of bolted limbo.
My mullet spoke Bowie to the innards
of the Gremlin X which stressed
the compressed freedom in steel
that appealed to the squalls coming from the rear;
from pedestrians knocked up on fear
who couldn't be curbed
from the catalytic converter.
A right-view mirror was crushed
like the careless spikes on my head
in a dead Punk Plymouth that voyaged
the squalls of air to aging vinyl sides
that stained in the Orwellian rain;
The Ramones who were Too Tough to Die.
The Explorer implored my final evasion
within the gashed grungy hair;
teared in lumps that stuck to the floor
making me squall the sounds of labor.
Copyright ©
skyhawk432
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2008-08-07 12:21:17]
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Re: Metal Bodies of Birth
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by Benny14 on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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Re: Metal Bodies of Birth
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by ReyAkARey on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:15:55 PM AEST
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