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I Am
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am the dark on the lightest day
I am the star on the darkest night
I am the moon reflecting sun's last ray
I am the tears after every fight
I am the pain in the child's eye
I am the dream that passed you by
I am the demon in the sky
I am the very last tear you cry
I am the shadow that forever creeps
I am the eyes that watch you sleep
I am the miracle you'll never see
I am me
I am me
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2008-08-07 10:54:28]
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Re: I Am
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 01:10:29 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this poem, throughout you really give an epic sense of self, and your descriiptions were amazing " i am the demon in the sky" that really freaked me out. it gave such a sense to the bad side of self, overall each verse is intruiging and expressive and overflowing with passion, keep on writing you've got some great talent!!! |
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Re: I Am
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 03:31:02 PM AEST
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If that's off the top of your head, I wonder what you could do with a little effort. It is a very, very good poem. I thought it was great.
~Me~ |
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Re: I Am
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:58:26 AM AEST
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I LOVE THIS!
the repetition of "i am me" really makes the poem for me,
though the entire thing is incredible.
powerful, sort of mysterious too?
overall, a great poem!
--Katie |
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