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you struggle. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:47:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you struggle. . .
with the words
& the meaning, too?
is this an antidote
or just your response?
I have no problem
being accepted or ignored,
a mere difference of degrees.
I have no timetable
or agenda.
still, I advise. . .
know thyself. . . only be true.
what am I,
if I cannot be myself?
& what without you?
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-08-07 10:47:42]
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Re: you struggle. . .
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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this has an interesting flow.. i liked it
rock on,
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Re: you struggle. . .
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:26:46 PM AEST
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Elle, that last line sums this up for me. Damn! There is an enormity that
carries the weight of that line alone. Like saying, yeah, I'll be okay;
I'll be alright; wait .... where are YOU going? You know?
Damn, I adore how provocative this is. So much emotion packed into
so few words. Exceptionally written.
~ Breezy
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Re: you struggle. . .
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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I really like how this sounded when I read it several times.
Nice writing.
~Stephan |
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