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Contributed by
apartment213
on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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never meant to fall apart
im never gonna apologize
cos i never meant to fall apart
clumsy masterpiece worthless work of art
so whats another mess we're never gonna get clean
these stone white walls
streaked with ur maskera
so whats another tear mean another scream for
whats another mess we're never gonna get clean
in the end in the end we're only gonna say goodbye
never meant to fall apart
im never gonna apologize
cos i never meant to fall apart
clumsy masterpiece worthless work of art
never meant to never meant to never meant to
fall apart
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2003-03-17 21:00:00]
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:10:51 PM AEST
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| ahh this is great, i really love how you laid it out, the expression of feelings, n' you've a great flow too:) another fine write from you, hugs nessa |
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 12:29:27 AM AEST
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good job....i know exactly how you feel...
Lindsey |
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 07:37:57 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of a song... "The Fragile" by Nine Inch Nails.... good write, I enjoyed reading. keep it up! |
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:01:24 AM AEST
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| this is very good. lots of though and emotion. |
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:17:35 PM AEST
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Good poem Ken... u dont need to apologize we all fall apart at different times. Good insightful poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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