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Swimming with me
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 11:52:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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How could you resist me?
Look at this cute face.
Would you like to spend the day
with me at my place?
I could teach you how to use sonar
and how to swim sideways.
We could do a upside down drive by
and twirl on our bellies.
You know I am smart
no meaning to toot my horn
there is not a better place to be
than hanging with me in the sea.
So how about it?
Is it a date?
Call me at 800 deep blue
I'll see what I can do!
*WINK*
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-08-06 11:52:19]
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Re: Swimming with me
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 05:58:39 PM AEST
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you know how much I love dolphins
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Re: Swimming with me
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 12:12:50 AM AEST
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That is cute.....you know that dolphins are smarter than alot of people...lol....I have never swam with the dolphins but I would like to be able to someday....Cool write.
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Re: Swimming with me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 12:11:34 AM AEST
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OH how delightful Shell!! I have a fondness for dolphins, (most creatures
of the ocean really) and love how you wrote this from their POV.
Rich is right .. it's very cute. A fun and wondrous write!
~ Breezy
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