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I couldn't Wait
Contributed by
hindou_1
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Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 10:19:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I could not wait
I couldn’t hold myself
My feelings are unbearable
Upon my chest was a rock
But my heart was light
I couldn’t stand looking at her
My eyes were hazed
My whole self was freeze
But my breath was fast
I couldn’t say it all
My tong was numb
Wide open were the lips
But my soul was talkative
Now I want to go
The land of hope is waiting
For a dream to come
Inside my sleeping eyes
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2002-07-30 10:19:18]
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Re: I couldn't Wait
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 10:01:20 PM AEST
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Great poem - I know these feelings all too well - nicely written too.
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Re: I couldn't Wait
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 08:21:31 PM AEST
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oh flibbertygibbet! love hurts doesnt it!
lovely poem.
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