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~Black Velvet~
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 12:41:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The peril of her heart
As stormy as the sea
She is torn between two men
And divided as can be.
She sighs beneath the weight
Of her lust laden thoughts
Dreaming of silken roses
And the feel of black velvet.
He remembered the glow of her amber skin,
the cool, and burning of her touch.
He stood silent as the clouds laced the blue"
the scent of her danced in his head.
Desire endless... like a star hurled through space...
He would have her…He needed her as breath itself.
She wondered what they were doing
And which would fulfill her dreams
One was dark and forbidden
A volcano ready to erupt
The other steadfast and true
A rock in her stormy waters
Always there by her side
But the touch has grown cold
Though steadfast and true
Her foundation began to break free
The guideline had been severed as he drifted out among the blue.
His touch to remain as cold as the deepest, darkest reaches
From the shadows a single hand comes forth
to fulfill her want of the night.
Pulling her in close she is able to read his every thought
For love and lust runs thick like the blood coursing through their veins.
For it is under the silver beams of the moon
She is surrounded by her silken roses
Enveloped by her lovers embrace
As he lies her down upon black velvet
2008
Lane,Shari,Michelle,Rich
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-08-06 00:41:27]
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 01:36:31 AM AEST
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Well we did it and it is super beautiful. Thanks all of you for writing with me. Whooooooo hooooooooo.
Love you all big hugs and kisses
Michelle |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by wheels on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 01:50:16 AM AEST
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Oh my! How utterly sultry and seductive. Very well written all of you. and again - Oh my - very beautiful and oh my... LOL
--kevin |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 03:01:35 AM AEST
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I do have to say that we work good together...I was a little nervous because I have never done a group write before. So I hope that everyone likes the way that it turned out...
I think it all flowed together very well...thank you guys for writing with me.
Thanks
Rich |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 06:28:08 AM AEST
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thank you for letting me be a part of this write ...It was fun seeing how it ended
Shari |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 10:22:57 AM AEST
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Wow, very deep with passion and seduction
as the old love grows cold.
Great write....mike |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 10:23:11 AM AEST
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Wow, very deep with passion and seduction
as the old love grows cold.
Great write....mike |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 11:04:04 AM AEST
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| you all are great..thanks for letting me come along. I had fun with this, and hanging" with you all. Lane |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 01:46:58 PM AEST
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Ahhh The Fantastic Four.... You have surely put together an amazing write...Well done!!
Jenni |
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Re: ~Black Velvet~
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by hose-aye on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 06:24:14 PM AEST
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| the descriptivness was touching. i really connected. it caressed my reality. |
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