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The Question
Contributed by
Thespia
on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 06:52:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Dancing between the summer rain
Blue eyes glistening, aglow and strong
he catches the rain, her tears of life
and beggs her to hold on.
Red lips shine, skin bleeds
as she sings the haunting song,
naked in the rain together, they weap
for who now knows where they belong.
Copyright ©
Thespia
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2008-08-05 18:52:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Question
(User Rating: 1 ) by ek_da_poet on
Friday, 17th October 2008 @ 11:40:32 PM AEST (User
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hey i was looking through my old poems and i saw one of your comments so i thought id give back
when i read this it had a mystery theme to it very good, im still thinking about it, kinda gave me shivers
anyways this was a good write |
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