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Listening to Dusk
Contributed by
Dom
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Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 07:41:25 PM in AEST
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Open the windows this evening.
It is time to let in the dusk and with it the world
You have been ignoring.
Let it in before blinds are drawn on today.
You do not even have to see,
Being is enough.
Let in the permeating stillness, birdsong,
The wind sighing.
Let them speak to you as soloists before ensemble.
Until you can feel the crow’s wings pulsing,
Until you can see the sky painting night,
Until you can breathe with them
You will not hear the day’s concerto
Or how it fades to a single choirboy’s
Final notes:
It is time to change your life.
Copyright ©
Dom
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2008-08-03 19:41:25]
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:23:16 PM AEST
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This is a beautifull write.
It's awesomely deep and very creative writing and thinking.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 12:59:52 AM AEST
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Beautiful as ever this was soooo! vivid in an
easy manner,
likewise good to read your work,
i've wondered what became of you,
welcome back and stay awhile,
still top notch . . .
Ben |
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 02:31:21 AM AEST
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| wow very deep and beautiful... definately a must read |
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by Muinanyere on
Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 03:35:05 AM AEST
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| I love it's abstractness, very beautiful write |
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 11:43:57 PM AEST
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Dom, it is EXCELLENT to see you posting again!
This was beautifully executed. What a whirlwind of emotion here!
And that last line ... HOLY HECK! POTENT isn't saying enough! There
are so many beautiful lines in this and all of them put together translate
to one great visceral masterpiece. Gorgeous imagery with a beauty unsurpassed.
Sublime writing, friend. Stay a while, will ya?
~ Breezy
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:28:53 AM AEST
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Dearest Dom, my oh my what a delightful pleasure it is to visit your pages my dear friend. I am never disappointed with the contents of your superb writes.
A mesmerizing write that is perfectly penned by such a wonderful and talented poetess. That last line, gosh what can I say? Absolutely awesome girl~ well done and it's great to see you posting.
huge hugs your fan,
Sue M
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 02:34:48 AM AEST
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This poem brings the reader right to that open window. I can actually feel the "dusk and with it the world" penetrate me as I read on.
What's the word I'm looking for...emotive, imagery....no, ...empathic! ...Yes, thats the word.
I am right there with you. |
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Re: Listening to Dusk
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 12:10:33 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, gentle and pure,
hugs n' love nessa |
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