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Hie yourself to home

Contributed by holy on Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:06:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hie yourself to home

It is midnight now,

I have lost my way,

fears loomed large in my mind,

Hie yourself to home,

my love!

When I went to bed at ten,

I saw our son looked pale,

I could see he had difficulty in breathing,

it suddenly came to me that he was in gas poisoning,

I carryied him outside very quickly,

downed my face ran the tears,

I was all on wires......

Fortunately,

His lips gained color,

his cheeks turned pink,

I was greatful to the night wind,

my mood gradually lightened......

Dear,

don't worry about our son,

he is now safe.

I am sitting beside him,

I will right here look after him all the night,

I know I will be wakeful tonight......

I feel to brooding about what had happened to our son,

I shouldn't let our son play in the kitchen this evening,

I forgot the gases was still very wet.

When our son saw me doing housework in the kitchen,

he asked me for playing there,

I agreed with him,

because it snowed last night,

it was still very cold......

It is getting very late,

I know it is the dead of night,

but my eyes is still full of tears.

I am no end confused......

Before,

I often felt the night is longer,

but as long as I thought that you will come back soon,

it could always make my mood better.

Now,

I am afraid of being alone tonight,

I suddenly feel it is so long tonight.

I suddenly realize it is so unsupportable tonight......

Hie yourself to home,

my sweetheart,

I feel so lonely tonight.

Hie yourself to home,

my love,

I want you very much at the moment,

my dear!

It is more than I can bear,

I am so lost,

I am not feeling relaxed,

I can't take much more of it......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-08-03 15:06:30]
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Re: Hie yourself to home (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 08:19:34 AM AEST
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the reality with which you write is always so brave an offering. . . might I say thank you for sharing your tender & true spirit? peace. elle

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