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Tomorrow We can Remember that We're Just Friends
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
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Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:41:16 AM in AEST
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I’m running this race on dreams and apathy
Which to finish and which to leave
Dreams and commitment fading to dust
My mind is now of self-torment and lust
Defiling my character is a brand new rage
Seems to be more exciting with each new age
Pick me up just to throw me down
Kick me once and leave me on this ground
Grounds for divorce oh I think not
Grounds of revenge the drive we fought
If you let go I promise to move on
Shades of summer soon to be gone
Tonight let’s forget that there may be an end
Tomorrow we can remember that we’re just friends.
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2008-08-03 08:41:16]
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Re: Tomorrow We can Remember that We're Just Friends
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by shelby on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 01:51:38 PM AEST
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Intense and perfectly written write.
Wish you the best.
Michelle |
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Re: Tomorrow We can Remember that We're Just Friends
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 03:36:04 AM AEST
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I agree with Michelle, this write is intense. You portray all the conflicting emotions that can be experienced in a single moment, and the indecision about what is the best route to choose.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Tomorrow We can Remember that We're Just Friends
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by holy on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 05:44:28 PM AEST
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| Great job with good rhythm, and expressing your lovely thought with free views. |
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