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torment
Contributed by
redsleeve
on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 01:25:15 AM in AEST
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just like orange you are two things in one
brilliantly bright, and sweet on the toung
addicted to your flavor and captured by your glow
the reason i'm having so much trouble letting you go
at this point in my life
i can't fulfill your needs
i know now what torment means
the frustration building
that makes you want to scream
makes you want to cry
makes you want to bleed
all at one time
relieving the pain
impossible objective
forgetting your name
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redsleeve
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2008-08-03 01:25:15]
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Re: torment
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by elle on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 02:17:29 AM AEST
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| must we continuously oblige ourselves with the feverous momentum required to impale the heart upon a wish, dragged by a comet, plied & launched from love? I do not mind the severity of it. I do not mind the cost. . . great rendering of a chance gone by. . . & the residue which remains. bravo. peace elle |
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Re: torment
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by Ed-master on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:21:54 AM AEST
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| man i have 2 say that is 1 of the best poems i have read in a long time well done man and i want to see more ones like that soon |
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