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~Daisies and Butterflies~
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 12:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I dream of daisies, day-dreams and butterflies.
Dreams that softly fade away,
Rose petals dropping, given freely
hope rides on colored wings of brighter days.
A tear that tries to hang on, yet escapes and slowly falls.
Wishing it to turn to ice, and break into minute crystal shards.
That can be gathered and they turn to diamond’s
each one not worth anything more than single smiles.
Each tiny crystal dividing, representing a wrong made right.
Erasing the things that never should have been,
turning everyone’s world happy and bright.
Depending on nothing at all, no one at all.
I dream of daisies, day-dreams and butterflies,
those dreams now fading away,
night is creeping in through the windows.
Shall I dream of butterflies another day?
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shelby
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2008-08-02 12:50:12]
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Re: ~Daisies and Butterflies~
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 02:14:57 PM AEST
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This reminds me of a line from Blind Melon's Soul One:
"Inside, pain in her heart often made her cry; outside, kiss the birds and the sugar skies..."
In any case, I like it.
Always, abraham |
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Re: ~Daisies and Butterflies~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:55:15 AM AEST
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this is a very beautiful write.. it has great imagery and i like the emotional feel to it.. great job here..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~Daisies and Butterflies~
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 05:06:03 AM AEST
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Never stop dreaming of daisies and butterflies, keep the dream alive my friend
Shari |
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Re: ~Daisies and Butterflies~
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by Crow on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:07:40 AM AEST
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| I know things are changing in your life hon, always dream..love ya. Lane |
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Re: ~Daisies and Butterflies~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 08:31:50 PM AEST
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Very beautiful I have to agree. Never stop dreaming...they are the little things that help keep us going day in and day out.
Hugs,
Rich |
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