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Cricket Blues
Contributed by
shelby
on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 12:09:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Little crickets singing at night
oh how we love their song.
Could lay awake and listen
the entire night long.
I love the crickets when outside,
but companies by that name,
bring me to the point,
I want to hurt and main
this rolling coaster ride I'm on
I sure wish would stop
I'm talking with my friends
Then I'm gone in a pop.
My computer has a cricket
I don't think its very fair
Every time I try to talk
I find out I'm not there.
Cricket bashing
Has become our new sport
Had to put a revolving door
on my USB Port
Every once in awhile
you may even hear someone yell four
as another piece of cricket
goes sailing out the door
Now you would think
If you pay good money
some service you would get
but getting booted isn't funny
this thing always takes a *****!
So it’s time to kill the cricket,
put it back where it belongs.
The only place I want a cricket
is outdoors in nature singing happy songs.
(Not on my computer)
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-08-02 12:09:57]
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Re: Cricket Blues
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 12:15:38 PM AEST
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Re: Cricket Blues
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 03:57:40 AM AEST
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a very delightful write here.. it made me smile
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Cricket Blues
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by Crow on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:13:19 AM AEST
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| you girls done good! this is cute" I`m mad at the damn thing too, takes you away from me to much. Lane |
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Re: Cricket Blues
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 08:28:20 PM AEST
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This was cute. I know those little buggers all too well. And you are right though....they belong outside not indoors being a pain and keeping you up all night....lol
Rich |
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Re: Cricket Blues
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 12:52:28 AM AEST
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another great one...
keep it up!!
wiz |
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