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Edge of Midnight
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 11:25:38 AM in AEST
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Evermore her sorrow weeps
Unto the edge of night
Wherefore the Babe sleeps
Destined for the light
Pitch black raven sits
Upon it’s thorny perch
Angels sing mornings song
Shining over the earth
Laughter and sorrows
Abundance and plight
Where good and evil meet
On the edge of midnight
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Re: Edge of Midnight
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 11:28:38 AM AEST
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Shari this is beautiful, the title fit this perfectly.
good and bad happy and sad all of makes it life yes indeed.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Edge of Midnight
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by Crow on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:16:48 AM AEST
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| these are my fav" just a little goes a long way..excellent write Shari, love ya. |
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Re: Edge of Midnight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 07:58:21 AM AEST
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wow...very artfully done and full of depth!
I like! If I may, I would change only one word, the last line would say, "On dawn's edge of midnight".....lol, but no offense, thats just me shoving my two cents in. :) |
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Re: Edge of Midnight
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 10:08:47 AM AEST
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a perfect little poem with a huge impact,
hugs n' love nessa |
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