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something
Contributed by
mackstar08
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Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:28:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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-whats the meaning of something?
-To grow up and Create big things?
-will that really make you something?
-Or selling drugs to disrupt thee
-innocent minds of young kings and queens
-but you say dont blame me
-this is what the streets made me
-or maybe
-its cowardly
-thinking your towereing over me me
-ha, thats not the meaning of something
-thats the life of nothing
-yeah your rich but you still have nothing
-man go out and become something.
-Maybe make some good money not hood money
-settle down and get a good honey
-let her spend it all and still have mo money
-to spend it on miss honey
-or better yet the blessing that J.C.
-sent down to thee
-Future hubby & wifey?
-yeah im young but this day and time its likely
-to see your bestie wit a baby
-some say he crazy?
-naw he just sixteen raising a baby
-not to mention his lady
-who sho nuff love them nice things
-so he struggle
-but still get her those nice things
-whats he got? oh yeah a 9 to 5 thing
-he learned how to support thee
-without hurting his family
-by putting them through the misery
-of not knowing
-if he he would be showing
-his face again
-oh but he will so lil mama go ahead and dream again
-Thinking he mops floors for nothing
-sike
-unlike you he became something
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Re: something
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:32:39 AM AEST
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I liked this had a rap tone to it with good meaning.
The only word I thought just did not fit with the rest is thee........... other than that it is good.
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Re: something
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by Crow on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:39:54 AM AEST
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| hey there is a message in this..it`s all good..Crow |
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