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Dance
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:16:03 AM in AEST
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Chanced everything
won no hand...
Steady yourself,
glitter pouring from stone...
A crisis with every exit removed..
any reaction might help.
Hurry the dance is called
can`t be last...but
who want first.
Quick to get back
jump right in..
they are all waiting in-line...
dance...
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crow
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2008-08-01 11:16:03]
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Re: Dance
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:20:49 AM AEST
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Glitter pouring from stone........... may I borrow some and dance with it in my hair??
I so love this........ Ill dance with you.
Hugssss
Michelle |
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Re: Dance
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by Crow on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:22:56 AM AEST
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damn I liked it so much I posted it twice...lol!
I think its a screw-up from the site
thanks shel... |
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Re: Dance
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:06:49 PM AEST
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| I'm getting in line |
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Re: Dance
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:12:35 PM AEST
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Very creative writing. I'll take the first dance, that is if it's a slow dance.
big smiles, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Dance
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by wizard on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 03:12:54 PM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Dance
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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If I MUST wait in line, I'll be dancing while I wait. For the dance can
and will pass you by. It waits for no one.
Oh Vincent, how you DO get my mind moving. Fascinating write. And
a pleasure, as always, to read you. :)
~Breezy |
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