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Eternity Waits
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Symbols of hatred
Power struggle over nothing
Waves of dogs tearing asunder
Moaning chattering teeth
Unity held deep
Fires can consume once more
Sharing timeless energy
Morning dawning
Eternity waits
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2008-08-01 10:51:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eternity Waits
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:09:02 AM AEST (User
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this is powerfully true.. and has wisdom in it
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Eternity Waits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:54:11 AM AEST (User
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woo-hoo! girl get right in there, very cool write..Crow |
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Re: Eternity Waits
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:07:27 PM AEST (User
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Eternity waits............ waits for what wahhhh ha ha ha
this is chilling
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Eternity Waits
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:50:22 PM AEST (User
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Once again...it amazes me how you, Lane and Michelle mesh together so effortlessly. Brilliantly dark...great write.
Rich |
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Re: Eternity Waits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:55:02 PM AEST (User
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oh my .. I A D O R E this, if for nothing else, than the
sheer fact that it is so subjective!!
Beautiful writing Shari. I love how you stir the mind with
endless possibility
~Breezy |
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Re: Eternity Waits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Personifyinthepoeticdream on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:20:38 PM AEST (User
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i havent seen someone use asunder every so i like that and i like this poem |
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