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Defenseless error
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:42:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I could sit near but could you keep me?
Drink your wine and fall by pretense.
Secured in our reality of dark slumber
show no shame, defenseless error...........
Blood on the blade, who's is it?
Do we wear our sin on our face.
Shame, no there is none.
Count down to the end.......
or is it?
Copyright ©
shelby
... [
2008-08-01 10:42:19]
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Re: Defenseless error
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by Crow on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:45:30 AM AEST
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| this is wicked" don`t give up to much to the audience" lol! woo-hoo! love this. Crow |
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Re: Defenseless error
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:48:57 AM AEST
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eeewwww this is goooood
Shari |
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Re: Defenseless error
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:10:25 AM AEST
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wow a errily dark write.. i love it
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Defenseless error
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:24:33 PM AEST
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WOW!! this is good...Very dark...but raises a very good question...one that happens to be different for everyone...
Rich |
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Re: Defenseless error
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:57:48 PM AEST
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Between you and Vincent all I can say is this is quite intriguing!
Like a preview of a movie you LONG to see, you know? I want
more Miss Shelby!! lol You have wet the appetite for curiosity.
~ Breezy |
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