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Silent breathing
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:22:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Innocence lost by the man
who takes everything.
The one who lays in wait
who covers his nest
and plays to the world
with haughty airs
fooling the fools
no glitter no gold.
His soul is owned by the devil.
Dirty little secrets
keepers of time
dead walkin
nobody talkin
expensive secrets
do not play regrets keepers now
shame on you, you are dirty.
Day of justice
it may be swift
you fear hell
you will live it
keeping your stone heart alive
with silent breathing.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-08-01 10:22:40]
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Re: Silent breathing
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:26:05 AM AEST
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cool write
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Re: Silent breathing
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by Crow on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:26:47 AM AEST
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| woo-hoo..this is cool..out there huh? just wait I`ll post ..."out there. lol good write my friend. Crow |
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Re: Silent breathing
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:13:18 AM AEST
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wow this is deeply dark and yet powerful at the same time.. it has alot of interesting twists and turns.. I love it
rock on,
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Re: Silent breathing
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:46:02 PM AEST
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It's definently different but awesome writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Silent breathing
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:18:54 PM AEST
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It is a different type of write for you...and I agree alot of twists and turns...very cool...
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Re: Silent breathing
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by Personifyinthepoeticdream on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:23:59 PM AEST
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| nice |
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