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Unfinished Business
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 11:24:53 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Unfinished Business
Buried in the earth to rot
Daily after my soul you sought
Banished to the depths of Hell
You said I had more stories to tell
Searching until I was in your view
Touching my heart with your “I Love You”
Without warning I was removed from that place
Resurrected, the living world once again to face
Here by the grace of God and the love that flows from you
Messages to deliver, both some old and some new
Thank you for caring for me my dear precious friend
I will always love you, until the very end
Deadwriter
07/30/2008
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2008-07-31 11:24:53]
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by shelby on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST
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Claps hands super write and I am glad you are back. I was gonna get mad if you were gone again dang it.
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Michelle |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 02:30:17 PM AEST
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This is quite the deadly love poem.
Awesome write.
Glad to see you back...............Mike |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by calebcrain on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 02:55:48 PM AEST
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its great to have people that care enough to pull you out of whatever hell life may throw at you
loved your poem. |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 03:13:53 PM AEST
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Nice write..
Jenni |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 08:22:01 PM AEST
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I have to agree with everyone else. brilliant love poem. It is always nice to have someone like that...that stands by you through thick and thin. Glad to see you are back....I have a new piece for you to read as well....Welcome back..
Rich |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 10:03:40 PM AEST
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DAMN... Deadwriter...
That was great.
Reminds me of the style I write in most of the time.
I really enjoyed this.
~ZiggyB
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:06:23 AM AEST
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a very lovely poem.. I loved the wording..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 03:49:57 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful, great write |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by greeneyes on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:22:52 PM AEST
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| Glad your back, everyone needs a good friend, lucky you. Continue sharing your thoughts. |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 01:54:20 AM AEST
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beautifully written, friends are amazing creatures...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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| To be pulled up from the depths of hell, they must have great inner strength...and a lot of persistence! Great tribute to a friend! |
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Re: Unfinished Business
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by theurbanpoet on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 03:26:05 PM AEST
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| Another wonderful poem! It feels like you channel your grief from losing a close friend in to poetry! It works! Beautiful! |
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