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Gone
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 09:13:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your skin
So cold beneath my fingers
No marks
No blood
Just you
Staring
At what?
The light at the end of the tunnel?
Just staring
Why don't you move?
Blink
Anything?
I've been told
Again and again
You're gone
"He's gone"
You can't be
It's too soon
But I can't deny it
You're gone
Gone
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KismetsPoet
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2008-07-31 09:13:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 09:45:02 AM AEST (User
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This gave me chills it seems so final.
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Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:13:41 AM AEST (User
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a very straightforward write.. I like the use of your words in this.. great job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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