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~Shifting Sands~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 07:38:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Seagulls calling out in distances vast,
salt on the wind and gentle fresh mist.
Magical place as far as the eye can see,
making one realize how small we can be.
Warmth of the sand beneath bare feet.
Walking along hand in hand.
Our souls bare, we rest at heart
wishing from this place never to part.
The waves coming closer, water chilled
a soft murmur of the life that lays beneath.
A world unto itself right where we stand
so perfect a portrait, painted by only God's hand.
shelby
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2008-07-31 07:38:37]
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 09:06:03 AM AEST
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Wow, beautiful poem and picture. Your
words fit the picture so well.
West coast?
Awesome write......Mike |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 09:29:30 AM AEST
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| The poem and picture were an excellent match! |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 08:25:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem and I have to agree that the picture goes along perfectly...It is amazing what God created around us for us to enjoy...so much we take for granted...Once again beautiful poem.
Rich |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 10:10:00 PM AEST
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Wow! Beautiful poem...and nice scenery in the photo.
Good work
~Stephan |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:22:08 AM AEST
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A perfect portrait indeed, my friend.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:24:05 AM AEST
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you took me there...
Shari |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:10:31 AM AEST
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wow a relaxing retreat with the mind.. I needed that for a moment.. lovely wording too.. perfect pic also to go with it.. i felt like i was there also.. another beautiful write from ya
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~Shifting Sands~
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by Crow on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 09:58:35 AM AEST
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| hon, this is beautiful, and I`m so happy to see you again,,its been so long that we walked together..Crow |
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