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invisibly dying
Contributed by
lilmom101
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Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:29:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When will they see you?
Will they see you when the water is red?
Will they see you when your shadow hangs above?
When will they feel you?
Will they feel you when you are still?
Will they fill you when you are cold?
When will they hold you?
Will they hold you when they carry you ?
Will they hold you when they move you?
When will they hear you ?
Will they hear you when you are speechless?
Will they hear you when you are Silent?
When will they love you ?
Will they love you when you sleep forever?
Will they love you when you are lifeless?
When will they see you ?
Will they see you when you are gone?
Will they see you when you are Dead?
WHEN?
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Re: invisibly dying
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by LifeFadingAway on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 09:33:43 AM AEST
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Searching for answers to these questions can take a lot of time.
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Re: invisibly dying
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 9th August 2015 @ 07:04:00 AM AEST
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This is a cutter.
Should it REALLY read, "When will they see ME?"
I like it and thanks for the rawness. I tend to slap a bunch of ***** into what could be said easily in plain old English.
Rock on!
Invierno |
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