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Always
Contributed by
jnep
on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 08:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Time passes slowly
But it will never erase
what lies in my heart..
Copyright ©
jnep
... [
2008-07-29 20:27:31]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Always
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by lilmom101 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:34:02 PM AEST
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| SHORT...very short but sweet and emotional i liked it |
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Re: Always
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 04:07:42 AM AEST
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there is alot of emotion in those three lines. i enjoyed it.
always,
megan |
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Re: Always
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 09:32:09 AM AEST
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You have captured one deep feeling
with just 13 words. I like these writes
ands write them myself, but don't post them.
Great write..........Mike |
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Re: Always
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by LifeFadingAway on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 09:34:41 AM AEST
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In just a few words you describe an emotion
Good work |
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Re: Always
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 9th August 2015 @ 07:01:33 AM AEST
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I guess no one noticed this is a haiku.
Well done. I like Haiku’s alot.
My favourite from my own pen:
My son is now me.
With joy and sorrow I note
his strengths and his flaws.
Invierno |
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