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Grounded
Contributed by
texasw97
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Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 02:22:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tears are coming down my face
For you are still constantly on my mind
I’m frustrated as I sit in this place
I feel like I’m running out of time
There is no one available that can come close to you
Everyday I walk around sad and blue
At times I feel like a fool
I’m so unhappy with my life
I have a female that is so quick to say she’s my spouse
I believe she thinks this because we live in the same house
It’s going to take more than that to become my wife
Everyday I regret not moving with you
Our last dance was a foreshadow of my future
For I’ve ran out of things to do
No matter the time I still recall our favorite picture
The one where I’m kissing you and holding our son
Without you in my life it has gotten darker
Like someone is using a permanent marker
For everyday remains the same
I’m communicating with people that only know my name
I’m so tired of playing the same game
Just once can I meet someone that can fit my frame
Till this day I still feel like a Misfit
I’m slowly removing people from my contact list
Once again I feel like a “Wildflower”
Fenced up with nowhere to go
That wants badly to find the perfect heart to devour
Whose roots are buried in concrete not allowing me to grow
I feel like I’m suffering here in defeat
Because since you went away my life has been incomplete
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2008-07-29 02:22:39]
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Re: Grounded
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by Taizy_May520 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 04:25:05 AM AEST
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| WOW! This is outstanding! I'm so sorry you had to go through so much loss! |
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Re: Grounded
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 08:40:01 AM AEST
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i felt every ounce of emotion that was in this work of art! this is an amazing write. but i am so sorry about your loss.
always,
megan |
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Re: Grounded
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:37:20 AM AEST
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Deeply Emotional
good stuff... |
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Re: Grounded
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 11:08:35 AM AEST
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This write very deep with emotion.
Great write...............Mike
Thank you for reading my write |
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Re: Grounded
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 02:32:54 PM AEST
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A really touching and painful write... Best of everything in the future....
Jenni |
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Re: Grounded
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 06:27:30 AM AEST
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"Once again I feel like a “Wildflower”
Fenced up with nowhere to go
That wants badly to find the perfect heart to devour
Whose roots are buried in concrete not allowing me to grow"
Incredible.
Very sad, and very beautiful.
You have a lot of talent!
Great job, friend
--Katie |
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