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nocturne..
Contributed by
jnep
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Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 07:33:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The retreating day
Beckons, as night heeds its call
Longing for the sun
Copyright ©
jnep
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2008-07-28 19:33:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: nocturne..
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 12:30:36 AM AEST (User
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perfect!! nice job,
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Re: nocturne..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 01:12:48 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful Haiku ... and the metaphor
is outstanding. A new approach to
an ancient idea. Very refreshing!!
~Breezy |
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