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You're Right
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 12:49:26 PM in AEST
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oops
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i do deserve more
i need to stop telling myself you're the one
i can't go thinking this just because...
...you have the most beautiful smile i have ever seen.
...your lips, so soft, infiltrate my dreams.
...your eyes illume darkness, suggesting moonlight
...your mind is a vault, brilliant but sealed tight
...your laugh brings a warmer beat to my heart
...i can't stand one second when we are apart
...you command the room with your presence alone
...my heart starts to race when we talk on the phone
...your face seems to stimulate a permanent smile
...i've grown used to the patter of paws on the tile
...when we're in the bed, we could move a planet.
...this is our tenth second apart now and i still can't stand it
when i say you're right
i say it with the upmost sarcasm
how can i deserve more
you give me too much to fathom
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2008-07-28 12:49:26]
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Re: You're Right
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 12:20:50 AM AEST
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very nice,
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Re: You're Right
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by Taizy_May520 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 04:12:34 AM AEST
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| This is a really great poem! A lot of feeling! |
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