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for the known
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 05:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The reluctant mind
is now a stern foot
choices have been made
Marble slabs
dropped in place
construction of the temple have emersed
for praise
just educating self salvation
for praise
for praise
just educating self salvation
for praise
of JESS
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2008-07-27 17:37:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: for the known
(User Rating: 1 ) by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 01:58:04 AM AEST (User
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So simple yet says so much.. easy to read and get through and flows right off the tip of the tongue if spoken aloud. I really enjoyed this and the pattern, it's unique in itself as it is not like the typical stanza stanza rhyming pattern type of poem.. thanks for posting! |
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