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For Love
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 01:51:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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For love, I'll hide
The conflict inside
With scorned, bitter pride
And watch his rage rise
For love, I'll lie
Even though I might die
As I bleed and I cry
And the sun leaves the sky
For love, I'll lay still
And I'll bend to his will
Though the pain in me kills
And with shame, my heart fills
For love, I'll sigh
As I gather my pride
Pack my things for a ride
End the conflict inside
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Re: For Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 01:54:53 PM AEST
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this is very well expressed and nice rhyme scheme going here too.. nice job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: For Love
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by Spike on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 07:51:43 PM AEST
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Yes, the things we do for love - even take a smack in the mouth and a kick in the self-respect some times, but only so far, as you final stanza shows. Well expressed and a good re-occurring rhyme scheme.
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Re: For Love
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 01:56:46 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written and nice flow and rhythm and use of rhymes. The message in this kind of describes why I hate love, the way I took it it was the opposite of a fear of commitment, totally willing, totally dedicated, even if it means having to walk away. I really enjoyed this, thank you for posting it! |
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Re: For Love
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by texasw97 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 02:10:25 AM AEST
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| I like this one. I think I am hiding as well. Take care |
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