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Let The Unknown In
Contributed by
justakid
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Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 09:23:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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The unknown lies above
the fin line between lies and love.
Amidts all unreal,
yet rains flakes of all we feel.
But always swept away
by the ignorance in faith
and replaced with the errs of the religion
until we've adopted a more blinded vision.
Copyright ©
justakid
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2008-07-27 09:23:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Let The Unknown In
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 01:21:24 PM AEST (User
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this is a powerful little poem.. I like the flow and the expression.. good job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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