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Release Me
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 12:35:09 AM in AEST
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i want to be with you
of this, i am sure
i try to kneel
but i'm passing through earth
our situation is hard for me
and you know this too well
the ground should stop me soon
but i'm falling straight through to hell
where i will wait for the words
to flow from your lips
for a seace fire command
to your ten thousand ships
of confidence and strength
bringing me to my knees
release me from my prison
like a calming cool breeze
just say those three words
your eyes show to be true
dica appena come dico(just say as i say)
i love you
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redsleeve
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2008-07-27 00:35:09]
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Re: Release Me
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 01:42:57 AM AEST
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| a very emotional write in few words great post |
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Re: Release Me
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by wheels on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 09:30:33 AM AEST
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Wow - you know i really like this. I love the imagery of passing through the earth. What a passionate and fullfilling write in all its heartfelt loneliness and wanting.
good work!
--kevin |
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