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It's all my fault you won't let go...
Contributed by
msmonroe
on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 10:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Disordered and perplexed if you probe inside,
But that’s the portion I’m trying to hide,
They line me up to shoot me down,
Overlook my anguish with a frown.
So what do they care if I’m all confused?
After all, you’re the one who’s being used,
Cruel and callous I wound you so,
It’s all my fault you won’t let go.
Perhaps I want to make you sad,
For the despondent feelings I’ve always had,
Or perhaps, I’m stuck inside and in-between,
This which is present and what could have been.
Your not true, how can you claim to be?
Your in love with yourself, so you can’t love me,
Your fragmented with spite, of this your unaware,
How can I love you, when you can’t play fair?
But you hastily decide my fate for me,
You hurl me back to sweet reality,
I discard my naive eyes, then look around,
And realise he that is faultless, I have already found.
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msmonroe
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2008-07-26 22:57:16]
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Re: It's all my fault you won't let go...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 12:08:15 AM AEST
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| It's so terrible to be feeling that way, but you've channeled it well. Nicely written. |
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Re: It's all my fault you won't let go...
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 02:00:46 AM AEST
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wow i love the taste of anger and spite good write i hope you get strong and wise from these encounters
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