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Hell
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 12:52:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The light soon bleeds to darkness
The hatred bleeds to fear
Abandon joy for shadows
No hope who enter here
That suffocating feeling
Your lungs are caving in
Tears of terror on your face
Your heart, it's filled with sin
Your organs, they are burning
Step here to meet your fate
Condemned yourself to torture
Your sorries come too late
So join your fellow sinners
They're all you'll ever see
From this point on, you're nothing
From this point on, you're me
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KismetsPoet
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2008-07-26 12:52:10]
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Re: Hell
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by msmonroe on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 12:37:25 AM AEST
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| very powerful. good rhythm too!! |
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Re: Hell
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 02:06:08 AM AEST
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harsh words to throw at yourself the only hell i see is the one you create
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Re: Hell
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by Muinanyere on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 05:03:17 PM AEST
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| this is incredible, very well written and powerful |
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