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Say You are always forever..
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 01:52:12 AM in AEST
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It was a personal song to Shelby, We thought we would get it to 3 minutes, not so personal and have it relate to anyone
with a loss of love, or someone close. Please forgive the voice, and the simple chords, they are roughed out. anyone can hear the song..the trials and errors by clicking on "my home page..a simple board I use for posting music.
any feedback is welcome.
You have always been forever
always been My friend
I looked beside Me where You always stand
"in a blink of My eyes you were gone...
I will rest right here till I see You
Remember You with a sweet, sweet smile
I`ll see your face, with each seasons change
and know Your not really gone.
You know it has come down to Me now,
I need to tell You again
that its this heart that fights a cold, cold wind
till I see You once more.
Please say You are always forever,
cause ..I need to hear that again..
I looked beside Me, and Your not there,..
" in that blink of My eyes you were gone..
You know it has come down to Me now
Cause..I need to hear it again...but,
"In that blink of My eyes You were gone....
Please say "We are always forever...
I need to hear that again...
Copyright ©
crow
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2008-07-26 01:52:12]
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Re: Say You are always forever..
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 02:27:47 AM AEST
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*With a tears in my eyes*
A beautiful piece, filled with emotion. I listened to the song 3 times while sending a PM and attempting to comment through the waves of emotion that filled me.
Crow, the voice is wonderfully soothing and the simplistic cords that you roughed out as you say ... brought a warmth to the piece that touches the very heart.
Love you both
Peace
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Re: Say You are always forever..
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 12:40:17 PM AEST
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OMG!! That voice!! It's beautiful.... soothing and sexy....
The song was nice too...just kidding.. it was wonderful.... I absolutely loved it....
Great work you two...
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