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talk? to who?
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 04:46:21 PM in AEST
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various thoughts
overflowing the page.
if i don't get them out
the will turn into rage.
all that is poured seems
thick and past tense.
admittedly at times
i may not make sense.
i follow my heart,
so onto paper it bleeds.
it shows me my past
my path and my dreams.
Copyright ©
redsleeve
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2008-07-25 16:46:21]
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Re: talk? to who?
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 05:43:54 PM AEST
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| dang... nice raw emotion you just threw into this... ill look for more of your work |
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Re: talk? to who?
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 05:59:04 AM AEST
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Good writing.
I like it. |
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Re: talk? to who?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:12:40 AM AEST
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I really like this- short and to the point,
It's just right
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