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~CONFUSED~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:48:15 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



~~^~~

I've been so confused lately
I don't understand my feelings.
They seem so out of character for me.
I'm satisfied with my life in my part of the world,
At times...happy even...
Yet when I'm with this special guy,
An added happiness invades my life.
But it's an invasion that I welcome
With open arms.

With him,
A sense of fulfillment envelops my heart,
A peacefulness engulfs my mind,
A surge of satisfaction enters my body.
Maybe there's a part of my life,
That's never been fulfilled
And never will be.
All I know is that he fills a void in my life.
I feel so very connected to him,
So close, so at ease,
So full of joy.

BUT,
The feeling about which I'm most confused ,
Is the fear I have within my heart...
Afraid that I'll never be the same again,
When, for one reason or another,
We aren't friends anymore.
One thing I'm sure of,
I'll never forget him,
Nor would I ever want to.
Yet, I often wonder,
Why should someone I've never met
Have this effect on me!!

~~^~~




Copyright © Jenni_K ... [ 2008-07-25 11:48:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:54:40 AM AEST
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i really like how you put your fear out there with this friend.. and how you expressed it.. this is great expression and wording.. I really think this is a extremely straightforward write.. I like this one alot

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:55:40 AM AEST
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This is really moving, good write :)


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:46:42 PM AEST
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Awe Jenni, emotional connections are the best. I would say to ride it out and try not to think of it inevitably ending! Who knows what may come of this friendship between you and this guy. I am sure he is feeling the same as you by the way.


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:34:27 PM AEST
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i love this, its completely relatable but original. great write!!!!


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 05:02:56 PM AEST
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tell him Jenni..don`t let that moment go by that might not come back. I love this clear and honest write. Crow


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:53:28 PM AEST
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Sometimes the imagining is more appealing than the reality - and we stoke our own fires, do we not?

Spike


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 05:39:50 AM AEST
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A really good write, jen.
I don't know the answer to your question but I can tottaly relate.
We all need friends.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:07:59 AM AEST
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If it brings you peace, go with it Jenni.

This is all about happiness.

Nice writing my friend...

~Stephan


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 11:45:31 AM AEST
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Nice write Jenni,

Nothing to be confused about. We all need friends, whether or not we meet them face to face or not. Anyone who is fortunate enough to find a friend that we can connect with in the way you write about should concider themselves blessed.

Deadwriter


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 02:38:11 PM AEST
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Truly spellbinding with it's inquizitivness,
a lovely tale of wonderment . . .


thank you Jenni for your read and comment.



Ben


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:26:04 PM AEST
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A passionful and love poem, although there is still so lonely......


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:26:16 PM AEST
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A passionful and love poem, although there is still so lonely......


Re: ~CONFUSED~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 11:37:39 PM AEST
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I know how you feel all too well...You did a beautiful job once again putting your thoughts into words. I have to agree with Crow....let you freind know how you feel because if you miss the chance who knows if you will ever be granted another. Great job.

Rich




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