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Until My Dream is Real
Contributed by
muinanyere
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Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:55:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am broken-hearted
I am sorrowful
Joy has long departed
I am not beautiful
But I want to hope again
I wish someone would come along
And wash away this pain
And sing to me a love song
I want to find love once more
I don’t want to be alone any longer
I long for my heart to be full and out-pour
I want to be stronger
I have waited all my life
I will wait longer still
Until I can be a wife
Until my dream is real
I hope I’m not just dreaming
And wishing my life away
While my tears keep streaming
I hope that love find’s a way
I want to be able to say
“I’ve waited my whole life for you”
I hope that he will stay
And that we will be one not two
I hope that he find’s me
Wherever he may be…
Copyright ©
muinanyere
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2008-07-25 10:55:48]
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Re: Until My Dream is Real
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by eeeitak on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:45:21 AM AEST
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| it's like you read my mind with this poem, i can relate so well. this is beautiful :) |
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Re: Until My Dream is Real
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:52:54 AM AEST
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Fear not.. that someone will come into your life when you least expect it..... and then you won't have to dream any more....
Jenni |
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Re: Until My Dream is Real
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:56:34 AM AEST
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i like how you expressed the lonliness in this poem.. its sad and powerful.. that day will come for you.. just hang in there..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Until My Dream is Real
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:12:50 AM AEST
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He's out there...Give it time.
Nothing works well when forced.
~Stephan |
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Re: Until My Dream is Real
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 11:53:10 AM AEST
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Maybe the tears you cry today will create the river that your eternal love uses to float to your heart. You have lots of time. Do not try to rush things. A great write just the same.
Deadwriter
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Re: Until My Dream is Real
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by Starchild7 on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:30:34 PM AEST
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Love will come knocking on your door when you least expect it, but it will come, this was very heartfelt.
With love and light Starchild |
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