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Man of My Dreams
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:49:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I meet your gaze from across the room
And I’d swear you can hear my heart pounding from there
And I don’t care
We run to each other but it feels like slow motion
I just need to touch you, breathe in your air
We melt into other’s form
Before this moment I had been torn
Tiny pieces were all that remained
From the day your light went away
But here you are, as clear as day
I can see you I can smell you I can taste you I can feel you
Just like I had before
It’s like something from a movie
Everything fades except for your beautiful face
During our passionate embrace
The surrounding spins and spins
Until we’re in our special place
We walk along hand in hand
The temptation is more than I can stand
I go on tip-toe to kiss you but to my surprise
Nothing is there and when I open my eyes
I’m alone in my bed, just as I was last night
I know you were there, clear as day
I could see you I could smell you I could taste you I could feel you
Just like I had before
And losing you twice is more than I can take
So I retreat into my dreams
Where my heart will never break
And I will never
Wake up
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-07-25 09:49:43]
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Re: Man of My Dreams
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:01:05 AM AEST
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| This made me cry, I have dreams like this too every night and I never want to wake up and face reality. Beautiful and sad write. You're not alone dear. If you ever need someone to talk to I'll be here for you. |
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Re: Man of My Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:04:24 PM AEST
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Awww This is so sweet and touching....
I think perhaps everyone can identify with this....
Lovely write....
Jenni |
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Re: Man of My Dreams
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:19:35 AM AEST
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Deep...with a twist.
It's nice to dream.
~Stephan |
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Re: Man of My Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 04:30:43 AM AEST
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Oh, I think this is beautiful. There's so much feeling in this and you really got it to come through. Nicely written.
~Jesse |
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Re: Man of My Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 07:40:26 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful, ive had dreams like that and they completely undo me, excellent write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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