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forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:18:19 AM in AEST
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number 1 to me
no no just to yourself
all you wanted to be isn't what i really see
Forgetting all that was
why am I here now?
I see the future but not with you
drive me to the edge of myself
whats left is what you created
screw who i really am because I just don't know anymore
*Vampyresss Jenni*
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:06:48 AM AEST
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V-Jenni,
How profound that I just went through the
same feelings. So much said in so few
words. Awesome........Mike |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:34:50 AM AEST
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Ouch..this is rough.. Deep write..
Jenni |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:01:07 PM AEST
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| I feel this way right now, this is a really heart wrenching poem, good write |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by wizard on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 02:52:24 PM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 02:45:55 AM AEST
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Powerfully expressed, this is something I can relate to in the current path of my life.
Peace my friend
~Shannon |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by Crow on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:05:37 AM AEST
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| Jenni..sometimes it gets so bad outside my cave" I just throw the door open before! coffee, and scream "do me! lol.I know this feeling. very good write, short but that might say more. Crow |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:24:28 AM AEST
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You are unlike anyone else.
Everyone has this experience at one time or another.
In the words of Helen Steiner Rice, "This Too Shall Pass"
All will end well.
~Stephan
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by iloveyouso on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 08:38:58 AM AEST
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| this is brilliant |
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Re: forget what is (an idea i got from a song)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 10:59:10 AM AEST
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screw who i really am because I just don't know anymore . . .
wow, i've just met a new poet named Jenn
this is more powerful than usual and i can
feel your hurt and fragilness, you've revealed
pain in all it's imeasurable despicable sides
in your usual manner of honesty fused with
artistry, a most remarkable teastament to
what a woman feels, coming from the darker
side of love . . .
Ben . . . |
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