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Nightmares Again!
Contributed by
wheels
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Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 02:37:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Nightmares again!
A scream within my sleep
Wrenching sobs to surface
Shaking breathless quakes
In a pool of glass
Cutting deep inside
Ripping thus a canyon
Spilling out my insides
Laying there beside me
Beside me where I sleep.
Crying ever sobbing
Pain wrenching oh so deep
Down into my cavern
Buried ten miles deep
Feel myself just drowning
Drowning ten miles deep
In this empty cavern
Filled with pains you wreaked.
Nightmares again!
Robbing me my peace
Not of soldiers bleeding
Bloodied by my hand
Not of even falling
Nothing to grasp at hand
Just…
See you in the darkness
Your daughter hand-in-hand
Smiling in the darkness
Laughing as you leave so bold
Leave me raped, abandoned
Discarded and then sold.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-25 02:37:14]
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 02:49:40 AM AEST
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Kevin,
A truly bold and brave expression you have here. You have caught my heart and soul in this one for I live in a similar nightmare each and every night. The smile I wear in the daylight is to cover the pain within.
Warmest of love and friendship to you dear poet.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:20:16 AM AEST
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wow this is intense and so true about how nightmares are.. I can relate to the nightmare thing.. this is just superb in writing of the subject..
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:18:45 AM AEST
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Dude,
I am sorry I brought this on for you. If I
had known it would have this effect, I
would never have posted it. Please
read my latest post. I feel so bad
as you are a great friend and I wish
you only happiness and dreams that
carry you through the night.... :( ...Mike |
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:22:52 AM AEST
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This is so sad.
I have great big ole huggs for you.
take care of yourself.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:28:18 AM AEST
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Awww Kevin, this is really deep and touching. Great description... I hope writing about it helps...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:46:43 PM AEST
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Kevin,
remember what we were discussing about those damn nightmares??
This just truly rips at my heart, I feel so bad and sad reading this and knowing you are hurting so badly.
I mirror Shannon word for word.........
I wish I could make this go away for you. What can I do to make you smile sweet Kevin........
tosses a tissue a rose
huge hugs and a kiss on the cheek
Love you you are loved do not think otherwise!
Michelle |
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by Crow on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 05:39:29 PM AEST
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after the Wars...thats what I call life, love and loss.
what peril hearts and minds can put us in,
what a spent hollow feeling you leave with the ending here. and then there is the feeling of a snapping dog...me? I like that part" Crow
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Re: Nightmares Again!
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by Crow on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 05:39:29 PM AEST
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after the Wars...thats what I call life, love and loss.
what peril hearts and minds can put us in,
what a spent hollow feeling you leave with the ending here. and then there is the feeling of a snapping dog...me? I like that part" Crow
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